I really really like this dress, and was wearing it while I read to my little nephew. He seemed very interested.
Absolutely lovely rhymes and plenty of content for older children. Hand made illustrations.
A bird gets tired of being aloneStructure Rank: 4/Good
I think the big challenge is when somebody steals their shit.Character(s) Rank: 5/Excellent
I liked everyone but the snake.Conflict Rank: 5/Excellent
It had some real moments of near panic.Dialog Rank: 5/Excellent
Very well done for animal speak.Pacing Rank: 5/Excellent
keeps moving at a brisk walkStory Logic Rank: 3/Average
logic?Originality Rank: 4/Good
I never read anything quite like it.Writing Ability Rank: 5/Excellent
Outstanding.Story Logic Rank: 4/Good
Except for the one thing I mentioned, awesome.