The author has a distinct voice that stays consistent throughout. This helps the pace considerably as the story moves unerringly forward. Tension consistently builds and releases just before the reader has a stroke! Then starts again. This is a winning piece of work.
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My Overall Rating is a 5/Excellent
BEST IMPRESSIONS
Great action, strong character development, plenty of violence.
Premise Rank: 5/ExcellentA chinese syndicate moves to LA and troubles everyone.
Structure Rank: 3/Average1,2,3. Like clockwork.
Character(s) Rank: 5/ExcellentAll were properly defined.
Conflict Rank: 5/ExcellentGreat sense of pacing.
Dialog Rank: 5/Excellenttotally real and believable.
Pacing Rank: 4/GoodMoved good.
Story Logic Rank: 4/GoodNo major holes, though the whats it called is never identified.
Originality Rank: 3/AverageNot really a new premise, but adds effectively.
Writing Ability Rank: 5/ExcellentWriter is A list.
Story Logic Rank: 5/ExcellentYes. all good.
